Liked the intro, very nice
But then the drums come in, and maybe it’s just me but they’re too noisy considering the context, especially the snare. Also I feel like if it’s considered DNB it would’ve been more fast.
The second drop kind of does the same, very simple but it sounds more like DNB which I’ll admit it’s pretty decent even if it gets repetitive after some time.
Overall it’s okay, the melodic theme is there but maybe it could’ve been more expanded in the drums section, but don’t work yourself too hard, it’s just my small review/opinion
Good luck in 2024