Hey I just made this script for my web cartoon. What do you think? (please don't steal it)

Script: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HRDVDK-OSQq2Rz09d-9rsvuiKfGqjHk-_OEw0Gp18SQ/edit?usp=sharing

Yeah It's just finding jokes is hard. I'm working on the script right now thanks for the help everyone! suggestions still help though!!

OH THANKS!!!

You fine if I use it of course in my own words you’ll be in the credits.

I need a place to start and can’t think of any jokes

Yeah

The characters are me santa Jack Frost and I’m trying to find someone or some people to also be main characters it’s at the house airport and North Pole. They’re going to the North Pole becuase there was a letter sent to their next door neighbor saying I need your help. The letter was sent by Santa and they wanna help so they go to the North Pole and find Santa he seems supiesed to see them so they make up a lie on why they’re there. Santa needs to get his Christmas corn dogs or Christmas won’t happen. Jack Frost stole the corn dogs so they gotta get them from Jack Frost they bring them to Santa but then Santa rips off a mask showing he was Jack Frost and they get locked in an ice prison with Santa they then think to just breathe a ton of warm air and it melts the prison eventually some how they melt Jack Frost and then Santa eats the Christmas corn dogs saying “Can’t do Christmas on an empty stomach.” The group freaks out because he literally could’ve just ate the milk and cookies. I cant think of any jokes how they get the Christmas corn dogs from Jack Frost and more. It’s so confusing and I need to have this Christmas special done before Christmas

SO TRUUEEE!!!

Please help I'm having writers block and I can't fricken write my first episode of my web cartoon!! I beg you for help!!

Oh sorry im a bit new to the forums

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So I went to write my first episode for my web cartoon until I noticed I don't know how to write a script. Please help me I can't figure out what happens any jokes none of that. I really need help learning how to write a script and all that. It's actually way harder than I though. I don't know where to put jokes I don't know what should happen and how it should. I can only think of like things that'll happen but like IDK how to get there. Like I have a cool plot twist Idea and the main idea. I just don't know how to get there where to start. Please help me!!!

The image looks so familiar right??

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