Nice! Great Visuals and Voice-Acting!

well u can transform that D into an A if u really try :D

It isn't very often that I come by a short cartoon that makes me invested in multiple characters. Love this a lot and looking forward to more. Only thing was the anime scene, it took me out of the characters struggle and made it difficult to jump back in. That being said, the Anime scene was spectacularly animated. I guess you can say it's a double edged sword. I digress, 5 stars for a job very well done!

Congratulations on 2nd place ( you honestly deserved 1st ).
I really like the style, the characters and the writing of the animation/ episode it sorta reminds of doreamon and I really like the backgrounds too. The writing was a bit basic tho but good enough to not argue with I'm just saying it could use bit more humor but that's just my subjective critique.