At 10/1/23 03:51 PM, sonleon wrote:
At 2/19/23 07:01 PM, irkomatose wrote:
show me your art that has less than 5 votes! i wanna help people get their star ratings
hopefully my inbox doesn't explode too much lol. not sure if ng has a mute thread button if this pops off. i get overwhelmed easily so im not sure how long this thread'll last lol.
Howdy, preesh the thread. Here's my webcomic, I'd love get some feedback from yall and the star votes helps to gage that at least ^^
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/sonleon/eastend-ch-1-part-1
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/sonleon/eastend-ch-1-part-2
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/sonleon/eastend-ch-1-part-3
Seems alright, but not really my thing.
"An boy" is not correct grammar- should be "a boy".
(Only words starting in vowels- a,e,i,o, or u - get "an". Except unicorn for some reason.)
"Ima" should probably be "I'm a" or I'ma", but it's intentional incorrect grammar so it's not as big of a deal.
Seems like an okay slice-of-life- hope your intended audience finds it.