Very interesting and beautiful <3
I'm writing a comic book, is there any tip you can give me?
Sure, when possible, show don't tell. This is double important for character development. If your character is heroic, don't tell us their accomplishments and why they are heroic, show them being heroic. Likewise with a villain. Also, never let your protagonist win their first encounter with their antagonist, be it fighting, talking, being clever, or winning a game. This way you make the reader invested in their growth through the story.
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